This starts so sad but it turns so quickly to something sweet i love this poem the rhyming fits so perfectly. it leaves a feel of hurt then changes to love instantly beautifull written! 5/5

This make me realy want to save you

You painted a beautiful picture with your words. your words flowed very nicely together. I really enjoyed reading this poem

5/5

Wow!!!! this poem is stunning!
I really loved the last stanza it shows how the pain is over....
keep it up ^^

This is an amazing poem Love. I read it three times and loved it everytime I read it.

This is such an asowmly great poem! I tottaly love it. It gose form complet depression to like complet bliss. Your really lucky to have someone that saved you! 5/5 sweetie, without a doupt

Aww i love this poem. The ryming is awsome and i feel the exact same way =]

This poem is so sad at the beginning and then it gets sweet. Good job :)

Wow great write. Alot of emotion. I wasnt expecting the way it ended, it went from being sad, to happy. Its so beautiful, and im glad it ended the way it did. Great write. 5/5

x--Alex--x

An amazing write... Great rhymimg, great flow. Very well written and expressed. Good job :)

That was such wonderful poem with a sad beginning but a very sweet end. Just goes to show that good things do happen to everyone, 5/5. Em x