Tango dance Lovers

by kelleyana   May 28, 2009


An improvision of closeness,
a single body with four legs.
sensuality and seduction,
a gesture with ambiguity.

A single body with four legs,
sensing each other through movement.
Putting us in sphere of action,
like total trust through connection.

sensuality and seduction,
capture his every attention,
by tricks of tenderness that tease,
movements of hips with ease and grace.

A gesture with ambiguity,
overwhelmed with ardent embraces.
The pulsing energy within
feelings that says it without words.

A Retourne is a French poetry form wherein repetition is used, employed. It consist of four quatrains (four-line stanzas), with each line having eight syllables. The trick is though that the first stanza's second line must also be the second stanza's first line, the first stanza's third line is the third stanza's first, and the first stanza's fourth line is the fourth stanza's first. Retournes can but do not have to rhyme.

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  • 13 years ago

    by OrangeJuicePerez

    Gifted & knowledgeable. "A single body with four legs" "Total trust through connection" feelings felt without words. You sure can write a piece of poetry!

  • 14 years ago

    by Bhavin

    I m sure you must be surprised to see me commenting... Well, my mind gets attracted once I find a mindblowing poem. You did a great job kel. The visualisation is simply superb. I hardly found any flaws in this retourne. Keep writing and the day is not far when you will find yourself on the homepage of this site.

    Regards,
    Bugs

  • 14 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet

    Really nice poem.i'll give u 5/5
    keep the good work!

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Kelleyanna,
    I loved this poem. You have managed to pen a very elegant form and held to the subject very well. I loved where this poem took me. The feeling of dancing and how it combines trust and love of the dance together, in order to pull off a beautiful togetherness. Exquisite write dear and I am truly delighted to have read it.
    Great Job,
    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisite, Enjoyed Kel. Wonderful Retourne!!!

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