Pellucidity

by Italian Stallion   Jun 2, 2009


The identity of expression
is the prowess of artistic creation
lost in production of poetry.

Executed filler words,
cliched ponderings written -
occupying pieces of art.

The creator of poetry
is the preside of attention
lost in transit of words.

© Copyright 2009 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 13 years ago

    by Anthony M

    Looks like I missed this one when it won. Unique write, gives the reader some introspect in regards to his or her own writing. Cliches are a catch 22; in the history of the world, surely everything has been said more than once ;)
    A short poem that can get the reader to think is always a good poem in my book.

  • 14 years ago

    by JoshCNakroshis

    Hey Joe. Long time no read. It's been at least 4 Years.

    I love this poem and I can see why it won the contest.

    I always loved your work.

    -Josh

  • 14 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    Wow that was good...really good..the flow beautiful.

  • 14 years ago

    by xx

    I like this poem very much as well. :D It's simple and short but it portrays so much meaning.

  • 14 years ago

    by Zeus

    This poem is very true an very well written.

    "Executed filler words,
    cliched ponderings written -
    occupy pieces of art."

    A perfectly written stanza with amazing diction, i.e. "Executed", "cliched ponderings" "occupy".

    Art is a form of expression and without expression it can not be art; poetry is an art, and without expression it can not be poetry.

    Great job!
    5/5