Left unwritten

by WaitAutumn   Jun 2, 2009


October,
Aria breaths upon them,
Painting the lifeless in auburn.
Unconscious,
to the warmth
They find themselves,
drawn to the melody.
Falling,
to the ground below
Only but one is not covered in rust.

The moment my eyes,
fell upon the beauty above
All the other leaves
were drifted astray.

February,
Anymore than a whisper,
brought vermilion shadows.
To draw,
a deceased wall.
Dawn forbid our encounter
Concealing the moon,
from my touch.
Darkness would grasp time,
allowing our dreams to collide
Only but words could pass through.

The moment her smile,
fell upon my heart
All the other paths around,
were drifted astray.

August,
The flowering beauty,
of unwritten promises.
Unable,
to take away.
The fervid sun rose above,
penetrating the forbidden.
Caressing,
the one awaiting.
Letting herself be held,
by forevers illusion.

The moment her lips,
betrayed farewell
All the other pleasures,
were drifted astray.

- never believed in forever -

(pour toi mon coeur.. )

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    Wow, I really really really loved this write! It's amazingly well put and it carries the emotions across so fluidly I think you have outshined in this piece. You deserve a 5/5! XD

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow, how could I have miss this beautifully written poem? I love how you use the months as guidelines unfolding the events to the readers.

    Darkness would grasp time,
    allowing our dreams to collide
    ^^^ I totally adore how you express this.Magnificent

    I must say that is a well crafted poem, your words are like a brush painting a beautiful picture of the events.

    Excellent work

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    Andyyy I loved your ending sweetie :)
    Very well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by falln angel with broken wings

    The moment her smile,
    fell upon my heart
    All the other paths around,
    were drifted astray.
    these words painted a picure in my head i know feeling amazing work. plz keep them comming

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    That's nice write. I liked the lines and your style of depiction. Well written!

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