Last Ride

by that Dude   Jun 5, 2009


My brother, my brother, what have you done?
I think of your awesome last motorcycle run
The wind in your hair the bugs in your teeth
The last thought you had
As you impacted the street
The skid, the crash
The crush of the bars
Now you have done it
and gone too far.
I know what its like
I have been there too
Cruisin the highways
with the sky so blue
Forgetting the world
And all of your cares
Where am I?
I know not where
The light is fading,
slipping away
We will meet on another day.

Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
Pain

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  • 14 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Wow.........

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    The ending really gave me chills, a quick read but the sadness starts pretty low and really builds up towards the end. You did a good job with this.. the reader feels the authors pain.

    5/5.

    Temps
    Beyond a Poets MInd.

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Wow... Tht was really realaly good. I can really feel ur pain. U can also feel disapointment with "what have you done" but then u feel the saddness and hurt of wen he left. :( srrry for ur loss 5/5

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