Shoot Pain

by John   Jun 7, 2009


I shoot pain with my words,
I break spirits with my lies.
I twists terms with phrases and shoot verbs into your eyes.
Sticks and stones can break bones,
But words can curse internally.
With one single tone of my voice
Ill send your soul to the infirmary.
Length and skill are left to kill because vocabulary is infinite,
Ill rush you with a certain rush of adrenaline
Rush you like a stimulant.
The mind weaker than the body,
the body stronger than the mind
If both fused to one level there's none of that kind.
A fusion of pain, a psychotic rush of agony
Nightmare slain, changed perspective of insanity.
But with these words scratch your thoughts,
Ponder; unwind, for unless you think deep or ignore
My Words Shoot Pain For They Are Unkind

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  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    A very interesting write =] I think it's a very good poem. Your flow was perfect and the structure works quite well. The way you worded the poem was different too, I really enjoyed reading it nice work 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    This poem's flow was so perfect it almost seemed to be Dr. Seuss on some sort of worped level.

    I loved your use of different parts of the english language to explain your words in this poem.

    "But words can curse internally.
    With one single tone of my voice
    Ill send your soul to the infirmary."
    ^ I loved these lines, especially the very last line which almost seemed to be said mockingly. In a way that's in your face and yet you just //know// you mean it.

    At first, your poem title confused me, but after reading it, it was actually a pretty well chosen title, though anyone merely seeing it would be curious to see as to what it means. 5/5 Exceptionally well written.

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