Stolen Fruits (Cinquain)

by Mr. Darcy   Jun 8, 2009


Tender
Flower blossoms
Are choked by blackened fist
Stealing the fruits of tomorrow
Today.

M. Moran
08.06.09
05.20

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Inspired by Miss Take
*Cinquain poems came from Adelaide Crapsy in 1911, who developed her own poetic system, which she called cinquain.

These were short unrhymed poems consisting of twenty-two syllables. They were distributed into 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 syllables in five lines.
This type of poetry was related to Japanese literary styles.

*http://www.newman.ac.uk/students_websites/~H.K.Shuthar/cinquain.htm

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  • 14 years ago

    by mandy

    A great writer can always explain what he/she feels with little words instead of droning on and on. You've done excatly that. Very beautiful, 5/5!

    mandy :)

  • 14 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Beautiful poem, and although it is short, the meaning is clear and precise. It makes you think of what you can relate this to in all of life. Great work.=]

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I get several possible meanings from the. The first is literal. Tender flowers, being pulled and choked by human hands leaving none for the world to enjoy. The other is that the tender blossoms represent the younger people being choked by society and their youth, thoughts, ideas (represent the fruits) are stolen today from the world.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This has got to be the most unique poem Ive read in a long time.. honestly. What can I say... indeed this can be interpreted a few ways, as Sourav has stated.. which makes it even more unique..

    Great work! (;
    5/5. Temps.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Michael
    I enjoy reading your poetry forms that you pen. Excellent job on this one.
    (((hugs)))
    Cindy

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