Sin ah blaze.

by Shar   Jun 12, 2009


Remember when?
Yeah i remember,
What a rush,
Careless days of running around.

Wouldn't you want to be,
Superman again,
Climbing up the walls,
Of Innocent Valley?

Yeah, you truly are a superhero,
Swinging from life to life.

Who cares of the sins we make,
The rules we break,
And the lies we create,
Because they believed us anyway.

Yeah i remember,
Cars side by side,
Na, I couldn't even see,
And you couldn't even here.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Mystery, thats the right word, anyways, if you got some free time you can check out some of mine, feel free to tell me what you think :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Shar

    Thankyou,i like to write poems that i understand, and if others dont...well then let there be a bit of mystery lol..

  • 14 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Thet might say its a little confusing but y'know what I think? Its like picasso, a poem version, I like the fact that you wrote a poem for people to think about, like, its their crossword puzzle or something, all in all, Its great.

    Keep it rockin'
    blessed be.

  • 14 years ago

    by M I L L Y

    A lil confusing hunny
    and one small mistake your last word is hear not here =]
    keep writing!

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