She Whispers "I Give Up Trying"

by Fire Catches   Jun 17, 2009


Part One

Alone in the corner
Poor lonely girl cries
Holding her arm
She whispers "No more I try"

Tears whisking down her face
Hazel eyes of green
They burn deep in flesh
Here's another troubled teen

Her life spiraling downward
To fast for her to grip
She's losing her mind
Her reality is about to slip

She holds her arm closer
To hide what made her fall apart
Closing in on her chest
Where is her heart?

She's giving her hope up
She's dropping the knife
She's giving her up
She's throwing away her life

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  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    >>the 2nd half or your poem is stronger than the 1st and i havnt decided yet if that is a good thing or not. a good poem, last stanza got a little lost from the flow of the ones before it, but your use of words has had a huge impact on me, 'She whispers "No more I try"' & 'troubled teen', i think your poem is great.<<

    Well done

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