She Whispers "I'm Dying"

by Fire Catches   Jun 17, 2009


Part Two:Final

Laying on Scottish blanket
Under sky full of stars
Out in her drive way
Looking at her scars

Frown washed upon her face
Sadness upon her mind
Worrying killing her inside
Each day they incline

Her heart becoming weaker
Every thump that passes
Each day she thinks of him
Each mark she slashes

Cold in her fragile body
Depression killing her
She blames herself everyday
Asking how can this occur

Sitting outside becoming fatal
Under the moon of no confide
Morning light hitting fast
Tonight poor lonely girl has died

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  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    >>NICE, very well done on this piece. from start to finish you had me wanting more and thats what its about. you could add some 'the, as, i , a's' into the mix so it doesnt read so riged but other than that - excellent. i really enjoyed reading this poem, and i can sence the feelings and emotions you put into it.<<

    Well done.

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