Adieu

by PassionCourageTriumph   Jun 17, 2009


It's time to let go
So good bye
Let the feelings flow
The end is nigh

I have done all I can
I tried to lift you up
These feelings must be banned
Although you were my first love

I want to make things better
But it puts my heart in a bad place
For some time you were my shelter
But your love is missing without a trace

I need to say so long
And block you from my life
This hurt will never be gone
But if I try, I should be alright

I love everything about you
What you can become
Though I must speak adieu
My heart is done

I care too much
It's what will kill me
To feel your touch
But that can never again be

I'll curl up on my bed
Feel my insides being torn out
A few more tears will be shed
With the pain of a broken heart I shout

Good bye my love
The one that can't be saved
You've chosen your path.
Goodbye to the boy
Who I watched turn into a man
Fair well to comfort of holding your hand
So long to the nights
Spent under the stars,
Good bye to the part of my heart
That will always be yours.
I leave that piece of heart with you
Remember how wonderful we were together
And that being apart we will be better

So again I say
I love you
Farewell, my darling
I bid you adieu

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  • 14 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is a great poem
    not sure why it is in the love section i found it actually kinda sad
    seeing such love torn apart

    also there is one suggestion i would uhh i guess
    like to suggest hah
    i would change the line...
    "Though you were my first love"
    to although you were my first love
    i find it just flows abit nicer
    it is just my opinion though

    Keenan

  • 14 years ago

    by Invited

    A good piece of iambic penameter and simple rhyming in this work. Brilliant! You should be proud.
    5/5
    ~Chins~

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