Raining with love

by Kaila   Jun 18, 2009


Eyes that hold secrets stare at me.
Like sun smoldering down, I cannot look.
The lines on your forehead scrunch,
making you look like your grandfather.

Your lips pucker as you glare down,
making the hair on my arms stand still.
All I want is to hold you in my arms,
the arms that want to kill me right now.

You grabbed my arm so roughly,
as if you were never going to let go.
I loved feeling your hand on my skin.
You burning with a different fire.

You held my arms down at my sides,
as tears started pouring out of your eyes.
You let go. You fell to the floor. Weak.
I knelt down begging to hold you; denied.

Then in an instant you grabbed me.
Holding me with your strong arms begging.
You kissed my forehead, it was done.
We laid there that night, under our tree.

Silent little rain drops fell on my forehead,
but you kissed them away with your lips.
The sky turned darker; rain pouring hard.
Yet we lay there in love, under the stars.

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  • 14 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Again good words but now the picture is lacks continuity. The reader is jerked from scene to scene with no connections. Left me with no idea of where you were going.

  • 14 years ago

    by No Need For A Name

    This is a boring poem with zero emotion. It's basically a cliche ontop of cliche ontop of cliche. Unoriginal in every way.

    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Hmm..Indeed another cute piece from you. I love the transparency in this poem that way it made me easier to imagine the scene that you tried to portray. Good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    I really enjoyed reading this poem
    although i'm not a big fan of love poems
    i liked this one

    Silent little rain drops fell on my forehead,
    but you kissed them away with your lips.

    i thought that part was very cute.
    well done.