Silvia and TJ,

Although this is written by two people who vary almost 50 years in age, that does not matter one bit. Some feelings are ageless, timeless and it was impossible for me to tell who wrote hat in this piece...so hats off for you two:)
This poem is about missing someone dear and I like the tone in which it is written, the images of nature that were used.

Swaddled in natures arms transcending,
as if carried by God's own hand.
Balancing on the edge of dreams,
my thoughts drift to you.

^^

I liked this particular part best, because I can relate to it so well. I do this too, dissapear into nature and dream away about things, people..when you are alone and lying in the grass or sand it is so easy to go places in your mind,being connected to the earth is so soothing and relaxing:)

A beautiful poem, I enjoyed it much:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

I meant to say: "who wrote what" in the third line, LOL.

You two did a beautiful job.. really a breathtaking piece, that is relateable on many different levels..

5/5. Temps

A truly beautiful collab, congrats to both of you, you wrote a wonderful piece together. I loved the thought of "generous mulberry tree" and every line was unique and heartfelt. A joy to read, thanks for posting! 5/5 from me, take care and God Bless You!

~MaryAnne

Great Job on this and I thought it was a wonderful collab. I couldn't tell who what what, so that is a great thing. Awesome Job.
I am usually not one on love poems but I thought this one had a very unique quality to it and I enjoyed it thoroughly. You two should definitely write more collabs together if they turn out this nice.

Take Care,
Kay

Well, I must say this was a beautiful write that flowed nicely and had great emotion. I could however tell who wrote what, because I know both of your styles. Overall this was a well written collab that held meaning deep within. Keep up the great work both of you.

Peace, Joe

This is absolutely wonderful. I love the feelings it gives.
"Swaddled in natures arms transcending,
as if carried by God's own hand.
Balancing on the edge of dreams,
my thoughts drift to you." the beauty and emotions that these words gives just blow me away. I enjoy very much my read. Well done, 5/5, kel

This is nicely written where feelings flow
together as one..good write!

Very well written by the both of you, this poem had a soft and gentle feel to it, as if written in quiet pleasure.
Well done it was an enjoyable read

Grant

Sylvia,
I love this poem! The flow is great and the imagery is appealing. It's more than 5! Congratulations!

I thought this was beautiful a lot of imagination and feelings touching each of the senses. An extremely well written poem that will be added to my favorites

Nice poem, you have a great mind.. i ,love it...