Don't Profile Me

by Good Enough   Jun 28, 2009


Why profile someone?
People would just judge u
By your words, your looks,
But only if they knew your thoughts..
Would they judge u then?
Would they create the wounds
Severed upon your own beating heart?
Yes, yes they would.
Their vultures, waiting for the hunt

** i first wrote this on my profile and now I'm actually adding it to my poems**

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  • 14 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Lovely metaphor and I completely agree. Great work=]

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I love this. It reminds me of that John Mayer song "Vultures" Anywho I love how simple this is. Good work Ashley. You never fail to amaze me :) Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    What a unique poem! Wow, well done. I loved your ending, referring to people as vultures.. Youve wrote a short poem but spoken so much truth in those words... I'm truly blown away by this, it was impressively written. You nailed thisss.
    5/5. ;]
    Temps

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