All That You Saw In Me

by Dustin Cole   Jun 30, 2009


Fading into the sea
Washing away this memory
Why can't you see
All that you saw in me

What did I do
For it to be the cost
All that you saw in me
Was all lost

You no longer see

You no longer see
All that you saw in me

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I like your writing... and this poem! It's a sad picture of lost love.. and how it makes us feel. Lol Like our love is "fading into the sea" Loved this opening line, and the whole poem... the pain and sadness can be felt in it.

    Very well done, and take care..
    Olwin.

    Olwin.

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