Just wondering

by devon   Jul 6, 2009


Your were my first crush
A bossy little girl
And i the quiet boy who blushed
You smiled & brightened my world

Always thought you'd be mine
Because playing house i was Mr. & you misses
I was too young so blind
Years went by many chances i missed
To ask......

Years later we meet again
And it feels like you nevers left
my words lost where do i begin
you have a boyfriend let me guess

But i know you better than him
I wonder if i you could be my crush

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  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    This is SO cute!
    A great piece!

    Very relateable and I love the words you use together.
    A little length on this would be a bonus, but I think the shortness kind of gave it the feel it has...

    If that makes sense.. :) 4.8/5 lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Fantasy

    Aw, this made me smile :)
    Short, but very meaningful .
    Not to mention true.
    Keep writing, I'll keep reading.

    Comment mine, if you wish ?
    Feel free to say what you want,
    A little critizism never hurt.

    Thanks,
    Fantasy.

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