Life's Uncertainty's And Disgrace (Saved By God)

by Hallo A Lilium   Jul 9, 2009


A world of selfish indulgence and fake laughs-
Self pity consumes you with its vengeful wrath.
Moment's of solitude starve you for more pain-
Gaping wounds that reopen in a borderline of insane.

Moments beyond the space of a heartbeat's disguise-
Terrible thoughts scare and are so visible through the eyes.
Troublesome tears that wash away dirt and scum-
Feeling paranoid and letting yourself fall into the numb.

We live so periodically in a field of human beings-
Sometimes even walking the earth without ever seeing.
Light switches left on to scare away the monsters at night.
They haunt our dream's and take flight in the dark sky.

Simple memories can be traumatic to the oblique-
Terror consumes those of us who are battered and weak.
Garage door's that open for us when we drive home-
Fearing not of the money we spend but of living alone.

The moon shine's down with it beautiful eerie splendor-
Leaving windows unlatched but locking the door.
Escape from the society's hooded gazes of concern-
Afraid of anyone's touch; Do not want to get burned.

It's like we fear what could happen but never does-
Never allowing ourselves to live in peace and serenity-
We fear both future and past; What will be and what was.
Let us open our self's up to the world of Christs divinity.

Never scorn those who praise; It's not wise in any case.
We come in number's and groups of many shapes;
The heavenly father saved us from our disgrace.
Let us stand united and live for the only one who matters...

His Heavenly Grace.

Copyright (c) 2009 Lilium

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lauren

    I really love this poem! I think it is written amazingly. It is worded very well and it has a very nice flow. This is a really wonderful poem, I really enjoyed reading it.

    "It's like we fear what could happen but never does-
    Never allowing ourselves to live in peace and serenity-
    We fear both future and past; What will be and what was.
    Let us open our self's up to the world of Christs divinity."
    I love this stanza because it is so true. We spend so much time about things that may or may not happen and things we have done that we often don't enjoy right now.

    This is really great, don't stop writing!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Levi

    You can really see your faith come through in this poem.. Thought the poem is more concentrated on a life that is scared to open up for the world is a nasty cruel place.. but with with trouble and pain the person is united by others of the faith.. It may not be the nature of this poem but it's what i saw in it.. Though it is hard to go back over it as i am using my mobile phone as my internet browser lol

  • 14 years ago

    by Obscura

    This is a insprational poem its very detailed makes you ponder
    the wording is fantastic
    the structure is layed out very well within the poem
    the rythem is really smooth flowing and easy to follow

    on the first stanza the last word should be insanity not insane

    but other than that really well done 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Wow! That was so deep and touching. It was like reading a bible or listening to a sermon of wisdom. It’s a shame not too many people think like this. There’s just too much ignorance. A poem like this brings a sigh of relief, especially with the realistic imagery. 5/5

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