In Death's Hole!

by Fire Catches   Jul 18, 2009


Sinking beneath this hole
Shadowed away from existence
I try hard to get back up
But it seems like a far distance

Judging my misleading appearance
Not taking note of my thought
But why would they care
They stomp over them & traut

Trying to pick my self up
Rejuvenate from what they done
How can this keep happening?
Help, Please, Someone!

I'm lying in the thick mud
With my hand up in the air
Why can't I get on my feet?
I'm at death, an inch & its near

So someone please help
Grab my hand before it's the end
Don't let me suffocate down here
Don't let me die within.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Another fantastic write from you.
    Don't let them hurt you, your better than that.
    Keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    I love the imagery of dirt and mud, its something i only occassionally love to write into my poems but would love to see more of. brilliant job on portraying the desolation! x

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