This is very deep and I hope it gets a lot of attention

Beautiful, the unwillingness to be vulnerable and let one in is what I took it to mean. I guess that's a universal challenge.

Hi Nicko that was an interesting poem, a different take on the human condition with some interesting questions along the way, well done and well written

Grant

Well crafted piece!!! Worth reading!!! Keep it up! God bless you always!

-Pink Butterfly-

I like how in your poem you question the inflexible mind that some people have. Why are they not open to other peoples' views? And u answered it perfectly...because they are afraid someone might change them.

Just wow. This took my breathe away because the meaning behind it and the whole message is all true.

We are keepers' of our own minds and we lock everything in it, the good, the bad and the ugly. We hide truths as we are all afraid and think its because we will be judged no matter what we do.

Fab write with so much said, Em

Just wow. This took my breathe away because the meaning behind it and the whole message is all true.

We are keepers' of our own minds and we lock everything in it, the good, the bad and the ugly. We hide truths as we are all afraid and think its because we will be judged no matter what we do.

Fab write with so much said, Em