Depress

by Jay Perry Jr   Jul 31, 2009


Trying to find, someone to blame
for all of my tears and pain
trying to seek, a way out
but its so hard in this cloud
full of rain, full of thunder
make me look up and wonder
when will i, live a day
when i can be happy
pain long, life is short
since a baby i have built a fort
to destroy, have no mercy
if anybody want some I'm thirsty
they don't understand, don't even try
then wonder the reason why
i kick them out, i stay on my own
they all just should leave me alone
deep in my heart, deep in my soul
i just want to feel whole

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  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A very good job . I liked the emotions displayed and the ring of truth in your words. It's hard to find that person inside that makes us whole. Since we are the only ones that can do that.
    Take care Good write

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A very sad, heartfelt write Jay, Lol. " I just want to feel whole" Depression can make us feel empty and void, and we just want to feel "whole" again. Very wel written and expressed Jay,

    Take good care, and all the best ,
    Olwin.

  • 14 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Wow
    so simplistic yet i love it !!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    They all just should leave me alone
    deep in my heart, deep in my soul
    i just want to feel whole

    *I can really relate to this part. Very sad poem but so heart felt and full of strong and clear emotions. I really enjoyed this poem. It was very short, but I loved every word. Keep it up hun Nik*

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