Our Love

A beautifully romantic write...You describe love with such beautiful imagery...very well done!

Sourav,

The whispering sensation-
Inside the heart, spirit of love beams
They can't see;

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These words were the most profound ones to me. Indeed no one can see what makes two people love eachother and the secret chemistry that binds them.

It truly was a beautiful poem:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Sourav
What a beautiful passion filled piece you have penned.

Beyond any utmost expectation
More than my moony wishful dream
You love me;
The whispering sensation-
Inside the heart, spirit of love beams
They can't see;

the secrets of our hearts that others can't see where we hold our most tender feelins. This stanz says so many things. mostly I feel the special love that is always meant to be.

Deepness of your eyes
And the sweetness of your rosy lips -
Pure delight;
I can see love, where it lies
Feel the presence in my soul and its grip
In sleepless night;

Love so deep .sometimes thinking of it keeps us from sleep. The purest form.

Your voice most tender
Touches deep core of my heartstring
Like a song;
I'm lost in this splendour
Life flourishes like boundless sea, grows as spring
All along;

Everything is so much brighter when we have someone to share our lives with...your words are shining.

We love, in delight and beauty
Do not fear- denying life's every sly trick
In fun;
As two hearts hold a mystery
Whilst love's unveiling a spell of magic
To make them one.

So absolutly beautiful
Excellent job!
~Clapping~
Cindy

Sourav.

Beatiful poem, I loved the imagery and the emotions thrown into this poem. I thought that the flow and style was nice. great work

Kerry Gardiner

I agree with the other commenters. I wonderful love poem about love. Nice and tender, has a soft feeling to it. Good job.