A wonderful experience

by Siham   Aug 6, 2009


He looks at me with his two stars
Silk like a diamond
Blue like a sea
I find it so deep
It takes me from this world to other
I don't know where
I shake with afraid
To can't return
But when i see again
I completely confident
I touch his body
I feel like it was very dangerous
But it becomes the safest one in the world
He kisses me ...
It was unbelievable
I can't forget , i'll remember
Suddenly , i wake up
I find myself in front of this two stars
My afraid was right
But it was a wonderful experience

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  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    I really hope if i'll have the same experience
    nice write siham go on!!;)

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, I love the imagery that you are sleeping and dreaming this wonderful dream when all of a sudden this beautiful goes to kiss you and you wake up. It seems like a truly, wonderful experience, expressed to the fullest. Well written, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Biya

    He looks at me with his two stars
    Silk like a diamond
    .
    .
    .
    .
    Suddenly , i wake up
    I find myself in front of this two stars
    My afraid was right
    But it was a wonderful experience

    Nice one .. it was a experience when he was about to kiss you n u woke up.. dear :)
    Love this poem

    biya