I am the one who...

by rene   Aug 7, 2009


I am the one who felt the pain
I am the one who lost the game
I am the one who's heart was broken
I am the one who has words unspoken
I am the one who cried the tears
I am the one who cowers in fear
I am the one who watched us fall
I am the one who lost it all
I am the one who believed your lies
I am the one who remembers goodbye

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This is written beautiful and shows the pain you've been through like I said if we haven't felt it we will eventually. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    This was beautiful. I could clearly feel the emotion behind the words. I would only suggest a few changes:
    I am the one whos heart was broken
    "whos" should be "who's"
    and
    i am the one who cried the tears
    "i" should be "I"

    Other than that, an excellent piece :)