by xXRaFFyXx Aug 8, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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My life is never been easy |
by Marcus
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This poem is brillant, most writers spend a ton of time trying to add rhyme and flow and there message gets overlooked. But this poem jump straght to the heart and it allow the reader to know exackly what you want and feel! I would structure my sentence a little bit to make it more reader frendly but anwayz Great work, you should read a poem of mine called "Your In Love". |