I taste blood...

by Mr Rhee   Aug 22, 2009


I taste blood...
on the edge of my lips,
from the cuts on my face.
After the slashing is done.

I taste blood...
when the skin dries and cracks,
from the heat of the sun.
When no sleep comes.

I taste blood...
when I walk off the edge,
and the earth rushes to me.
It all goes black.

I taste blood...
when I walk down the halls,
and into the walls.
No hands out, face first.

I taste blood...
after the gun goes off,
and my head is blown open.
Everything falls out.

I taste blood...
when there is no tomorrow,
everything has faded away.
Death comes to my door.

I taste blood...
when I bash my head against the rock,
until there is nothing left.
My heart still beats.

I taste blood...
when my ribs are broken,
and tear my lungs to shreds.
I keep waking up.

I taste blood...
from the broken heart,
like a dozen knives in my chest.
The pain is finally gone.

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  • 14 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow i really liked it the pain in your words was so vivid i mean you expressed what you wanted to say so easily great job! i loved it 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    I know the taste of the blood..but using blood to your piece. i pictured out alot of things... ofcourse the STRONG powerful emotion of every stanza is strike me, stunning me and feel your piece.

    KEEP IT UP

  • 14 years ago

    by desiring love

    Wow I love the ending! Good!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    The last verse is missing a statement I think it should be bloody minded yet leaves me flat.

    I taste blood...
    from the broken heart,
    like a dozen knives in my chest.
    The pain is finally gone.

    perhaps

    I taste blood...
    from my broken heart,
    that is like a dozen knives in my chest.
    forcing all my pain to finally go.

    Blind agony of the heart what do you think?