The Forge Of My Soul (Double Haiku)

by James   Aug 26, 2009


Tear my broken Heart
Forge it in fires of anger
Hammered with sorrow

Quenched in my tears
Again and again, I forge
Purging the weakness

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  • 13 years ago

    by James

    I thought I got the syllable count right...

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    An overall great first attempt on the Haiku though you did make several errors in the syllable count but still it was a great first attempt and I really liked the idea at which you came to this poem. Haiku are really hard to do though they may seem easy. So all in all I think you have done a great job and keep writing.

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