Wrote it for a friend

by PassingAngel   Aug 29, 2009


[ Side Note: This is from a guy's point of view. My friend wanted me to help him write a song/poem. ]

Can I talk to you for a minute, Miss?
It'll only take a moment, I promise.
Damn, it's so hard to explain this.

Sometimes when I see you I feel my heart skip
My knees lock in place and I start to lose grip
There's something about you that just makes me stare
But then I stop, thinking if only you cared.

I walk in the street and I see you right there
But at me you're not looking, for that would be rare
I don't dare say Hi, cause I can't bare to pretend
That there's nothing there, you're just a girl, just a friend

I wish you were mine, but I also wish you the best
It just might be better, with these feelings suppressed
After all, how could I think of just me, or myself
When you're all I can think of, just you, nothing else

I can't seem to stop, you're calling me in
I hear your sweet voice, my head starts to spin
I'm becoming quite weak, I don't know what to do
It seems once again, I've fallen hard over you

You're not like the others, of that I can see
You deserve something better, and that isn't me
I live for your joy, whatever the cause is
You know I'll be here, even if you are his

It's just that I can't seem to grasp the fact
That you're so amazing, I had to react
I guess you don't see me the way I see you
But as long as you're happy, I guess I am too.

© PassingAngel

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  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I also wanted to keep reading this. i wasn't bored at all and it was just really awesome how you kept the readerrs attention! great job! keep it up! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by East Poetry

    I really really liked this, the whole thing is really interesting, It flowed well and I just wanted to keep reading and reading more. My favorite thing about this poem is how it ends. It wraps up the whole poem perfectly, Its the way every poem should end and makes the whole read shine. Your a great writer. keep up the good work.

    Review another of mine and i will yours.

    thx for reading my poem beautiful taint.

  • 14 years ago

    by Aussie

    I like the form mat. the secound vers is wise. amazing work:)