Wow..that was pretty freakin' awesome...You successfully filled the readers curiousity til end..The ending you put up made sense to the whole poem. The repetitions of selected words made the poem more interesting...Loved it.

I'm liking the repeition at the beggining. I like your poems, you are very good at describing things, emotions, settings, I am wondering if you should just focus on one though. I like your poems, they are good, and have lots of potential though.

Wow I loved this so much!
Gosh wow at loss of words.
5/5
Take Care,
Kortney

Excellent and interesting... (4/5)

Very well done. Stanza no 3, caught my eye, and I realized I'd been there before. Great lines, all throughout.

Wow.
i loved it.
very good.
5/5

-Scarlett Ann

This is amazing :)

I love this poem 100/100