Comments : Hanging

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Wow..that was pretty freakin' awesome...You successfully filled the readers curiousity til end..The ending you put up made sense to the whole poem. The repetitions of selected words made the poem more interesting...Loved it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Esther

    I'm liking the repeition at the beggining. I like your poems, you are very good at describing things, emotions, settings, I am wondering if you should just focus on one though. I like your poems, they are good, and have lots of potential though.

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow I loved this so much!
    Gosh wow at loss of words.
    5/5
    Take Care,
    Kortney

  • 14 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Excellent and interesting... (4/5)

  • 14 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Very well done. Stanza no 3, caught my eye, and I realized I'd been there before. Great lines, all throughout.

  • 13 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    Wow.
    i loved it.
    very good.
    5/5

    -Scarlett Ann

  • 12 years ago

    by empty inside

    This is amazing :)

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

    I love this poem 100/100