R.I.P Dakota [[Never Forgotten]]

by XxBabii GirlxX   Sep 1, 2009


I cant believe your gone
its been a month and I wait for you to
come on-line
Lord I'm crying, please tell me he's here
give me a sign..
I'm on my knee's begging the Lord please
are you there??
are you listening??
I just cant see how you could be gone
I remember the other day your smile was big and bright
and now the days are colder and we grieve.
I pray at night that GOD will watch over your family
we all know we wont see your face light up again
I would give anything for one more day with you
Dakota its something that we all say
you told me to be brave
you would be here
and I'm crying over your gave
are you there??
the last words i heard were " I'm Always Here For You"
I didn't want them to be your last
you will forever be in my heart
your memories are not my past
but they are my future..
its you smile I crave
its your laugh I miss
its you that I want back

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  • 16 years ago

    by Em

    Really sorry about your loss, very heartwrenching poem. It touched me very badly, 5/5. Em x

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I'm so very sorry for your loss. I don't feel as though I could properly comment on all aspects of this poem, because its not the type of thing I like to suggest making changes on. It's too personal and it's YOUR way of grieving and remembering your friend; something that should never be changed.

    I know what it's like to lose a friend, I know the grief and the loneliness and how things change over time. Just know that things get better and things get easier and that doesn't mean you're forgetting them - it just means you're doing what they would like.

    Sorry again and my heart goes out to their loved ones.

  • 16 years ago

    by StopTheMadness

    Awww!!! i was almost crying!! im so sorry this happened to u! it hurts when u loose someone u love i know. i hope that ur heart will me filed with joy once more! :)

    Jessica

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