Stars
by katie Sep 6, 2009
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I look up at the stars every night |
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14 years ago
"your" should be "you're".
I felt this had potential but it was short and not detailed enough. You did show emotion though and from what you have so far, you are off to a good start, but I think you could elaborate more and this piece will grow greatly.
4/5 from me, take care and God bless!
~MaryAnne
