Tell me, please

by Redo Me   Sep 13, 2009


I cant do this much longer
i hate feeling all this pain
crying, crying, crying
thats all i ever do
please tell me this isn't true
tell me its only me and you
i cant do without you
you have to be in my life
i really don't know what i would do
tell me shes not in your life again
tell me you haven't been lying to me
baby i love you
why cant you love me like i love you
your gunna make me do it again
stop lying i cant take it anymore
i want to be your only one
i want to know that you don't need anyone else
i don't want to cry anymore
please baby just tell me the truth
tell me you need me like i need you
i cant keep doing this
please don't do this to me...

this was something i wrote during a relationship. it doesn't rhyme but its truly from the heart.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Redo Me

    Exactly. thats how i was in this relationship. but thanks for saying it is good(:

  • 14 years ago

    by MoveAlong

    I think this poem is very good, it definitely shows how girls tend to develop a need for guys in a relationship that guys never seem to develop for girls.

  • 14 years ago

    by Redo Me

    Thank you very much(:

  • 14 years ago

    by Allanah Asphyxia

    This Is Very Good,(: