Impulsive Longing

by Beautiful Chaos   Sep 29, 2009


Arousal fills the air
Hands, skin, the sting of lust
Lightning fingertips
Escaping breath

Primal pounding
Esurient lips
Devouring flesh
Such carnal hunger

Night is a blanket
The stars
A twinkling audience
To our transgression

Fog settles
Enveloping a waking mind
Setting free
Subconscious desires

Animalistic temperments
Break the chains of innocence
Unleashing
Raw, primordial lust

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  • 14 years ago

    by Fran

    A wonderful paean to passion. Love the phrasing in this poem, 'primal pounding', 'raw primordial lust' just capture the essence of our ancient desires.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    A wonderful piece of love's passion.
    Excellent!
    Take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    I like how you created a rhythm , even though it doesn't rhyme . The lines flow really nicely together, and your wording is lovely . There's nothing to critique , 5/5 .

  • 14 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Wonderful write dear. There is so much passion in the verse and it was displayed in a great tone. Excellent job. 5/5

    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The start of a fiery passion unfolding. You
    take the reader through each stage of love..
    very nice!

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