What a sweet, and heart-warming poem! It makes me think of everything that's beautiful in this world. Rainbows, chocolate, sunshine, it all came at me so quickly! It was a wonderful rush! Awesome write!!! (I wish I could vote higher then a 5)
Just catching up on my commenting. You did very well with the form. I am glad Samia brought it to the site for us. Your words are soothing and makes the reader want to dance, cheek to cheek, or at least it did me, with their lover. Well done.
So sorry for commenting so late, I haven't been very active lately. Anyway I loved the form of this poem! You used such short and simple words that truly seemed to dance around each other, the beat and passion was there and shined so strongly. Very lovely Ingrid, nice job!
You have written such a 'real' poem here Ingrid.
A poem that makes me feel like I am actually dancing on a floor somewhere, with this lady in my arms, as I read each word that you have written.
You have given this poem a life of its own, and placed me into a world of dreamy thoughts and wishes. Wonderful work Ingrid!