The feelings I save

There is a lot of hurt in these lines but it won't last forever, nothing does. Keep up the great writing.

This is really sad, but if we have the courage to move on and put it in the past it isn't so bad afterall and in time the pain will go away and we'll find someone new. Well done. (:

Thanks Kurt, next time i`ll use lots of protection... :)

I really enjoyed the simple structure of this poem. No fancy poetic devices or rhyming schemes to distract the reader. It sucks when you lose that closeness with someone you've been together with and really fallen for. Keep writing. It sucks to be burned, but next time use sunscreen =). Best of luck.

Karla has the best advice. As difficult as it is, moving on is the best thing for you. Well done.