Where'd you go?

by Mikaela DLC   Oct 7, 2009


Way over our heads,
The silent scream
Of a needing friend.

We can't find him,
Where has he been?

With his voice slowly melting,
His scream swallows everything.

The bright lights finally turned dim,
Oh where,
Where has he been?

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  • 12 years ago

    by Mikaela DLC

    Thank you, I appreciate your constructive criticisms. i will do my best at it now :D

  • 14 years ago

    by HillaryNicole

    I couldnt really grasp the whole point in the poem. But I love the words you chose.

  • 14 years ago

    by broken soul

    Well done....well i guess they leave cux it had to happen so...sooner or later

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