Help the children

by Im a poetic scholar   Oct 12, 2009


So many children
all around the world
yet they have no place,to lye there precious heads

As i see people complain
they never stop to think
they say they have so much care, but
what about the children

They go to bed hungry
stomachs filled with air
but while your complaining about what you dont have
what about the children

Not knowing if they will wake up the next day
Not knowing how to survive on there own
because all they had is now gone
buried 6 feet under from aids

So wat about the children...

Next time you wanna complain
I want you to think these words.....
What
About
The
Children

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  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I think the message here is amazing. It does definitely make one think about the complaints we make regarding what we don't have. We have EVERYTHING compared to what some people have.

    My thoughts...I think the comment you made everything they have being burried 6 feet under from aids was a little random. If you're going to write about a particular topic and problem that upsets you then you should be more specific using more details to the direct problem. I was reading the poem and was thrown off by that comment as I have no idea what you were talking about. Just my thoughts. Other than that...I like this write. I like to read thought provoking poetry and this surely was one of those. Good luck! :)

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