Make a turn

by Jenie   Oct 28, 2009


Your truly are clueless
Sometimes u just dont get it
I repeat and repeat what im saying
Its like the basics dont click

I try to keep my cool
And not be "that girl"
But when im getting this upset
It flips my world

I love you with all my heart
Thats why I let it go
But I am getting sick and tired
And im sure secretly you know

I have to ask for things
More than twice
I know I come off nagging
But its hard to fake nice

When we argue our little fights
I feel like its going in one ear
And out the other
PLEASE JUST LISTEN AND HEAR!

"im sorry. Your right"
thats the healing phrase
It seems like the right response
But not every other day

If it wernt for you
I would have never understood faith
But that doesnt change the fact
That you make me irate

I know I am not perfect
Far from it to be exact
But sweety when you dont listen
Your making a large impact

I wouldnt change what we have
If the world was in threat
But I would like you to work on things
Especially when you forget

Im sorry if this comes off strong
But Iv expressed this before
And I dont think it clicked
So maybe this time you wont ignore

We are not in jeopardy
But my feelings are on thin ice
I would love for you to respond
Before I ask twice

Baby you are all I could dream of
But I do have slight concerns
Just open your eyes
And make a short turn

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  • 10 years ago

    by Kurt

    I liked the flow of this poem. It is fast paced and helps the reader feel how upset the main character is.

    "I wouldnt change what we have
    If the world was in threat
    But I would like you to work on things
    Especially when you forget"

    I felt like this stanza's rhymes were forced and this caused a slight hiccough in the overall flow. All in all however, the poem was well written and an enjoyable read.