I'm done.

by tryingtosurvive   Nov 14, 2009


Can you see the bottle reflecting in my eyes?
lets play a guessing game.
how many do you think i took?
... 1, 2, 3? keep going baby
I plan to end it tonight
no messing around
I'm done.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I wasnt quite sure what to make of this poem at first but I found after a second read it was the emotion that drew me in, this is an interesting write and i liked the format of the poem! Great job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This I believe is a personal poem that lets out your true feelings of wishing your life away, we've all been there in times of despair. 5/5, Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Not Enough

    Hmm... Not sure what to say about it. I really like it but I don't know why. I guess it just reminds me of what I was going through. You should write more like this.

    Soda <3

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