Have You Ever

by Nicole Kinder   Jun 15, 2004


Have u ever felt so out of place,
like u don't belong
have u ever felt so lonely
and knew u weren't wrong?

Have u ever been surrounded by people,
and yet felt so alone
like no one was paying attention,
like your presence was unknown?

Have you ever felt that no one cared
especially not for you,
and have u ever heard them talking sh*t
and found the exclusion true?

Have u ever realized,
that most people really don't care
it doesn't make a difference
if you're even there?

Have u come to see,
the true intentions in their eyes,
that will never look at you,
despite your pain-stricken cries?

Have u ever felt this way?
Felt like u were alone
and realized that your feelings
constantly went unknown?

Well, Ive felt this way,
day in and day out.
This is all the pain,
that has caused me to scream and shout.

For everyone whos felt this way,
just know youre not alone.
And that winds always change,
this feeling isnt set in stone.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sonya

    i liked it, i like it alot lol. its written really well and it has a lot of meaning! i can/could also relate to this one as well! you should really persue poetry writting!
    ..sonya..

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Ariel

    another great1 and alot of ppl includeing me can probably relate to it i gave it a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by Million Tears

    hey nice poem!!! you got me again in the last part!!! i really like them!

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicole Kinder

    alright, thatnks for the comments, and you guys were right, it was lacking something, so i added to the end of it. And because this is a poem i wrote a while ago, and i dont feel this way anymore, i decided to make it more of a inspirational piece. hope you guys like!

  • 19 years ago

    by David

    Nice poem, with nice rhymes.
    The theme is something that most people can relate too, or will in the future.

    You need at least four more lines to close the poem. It seem to be waiting for them.

    try to end it with a non-question stanza.
    a 'if you have then'

    David

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