Wow...extremely forceful and deep. I never get tired of reading about "depression or suicide" or whatever falls under thoughs catorgories. Well written except for a few miss spellers but hey...i got the point.lol. great job!
Other than a few minor misspellings it was very good. I can relate to the feeling. I'm like victoria I always enjoy a 'depression or suicide' poem. You paint such a vivid picture with your writing it's like it's happening right in front of me.
I also found out while reading this, I can not listen to music and read and comprehend a poem at the same time.