Comments : Years of Torment

  • 11 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

  • 11 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

  • 11 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

  • 11 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

  • 11 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

  • 11 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

  • 11 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

  • 11 years ago

    by MERCY is never shown

    Wow this was great you really seem to have a talent especially for the sad poems they are amazing Bravo!

  • 11 years ago

    by Sadespair

    What Mercy is never shown said.!.
    This sad poem is beautiful...
    in a morbid kind of way..aha

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessie

    Amazingly written. but I am fearful because your Info claims your poems are written from self experiences

  • 11 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    This poem expressed such a deep, rough emotion. I was reading your poem and o could visiualize this scene and i can truly relate to this poem. Well done.

  • 11 years ago

    by XxLastHopexX

    Wow....this poem was great.....I kept wanting to read.....i was lost in your poem.....that is really good....keep it up...dont give up. I've been to that dark dark place before

  • 11 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    LOVED IT

  • 11 years ago

    by victoria

    Wow...extremely forceful and deep. I never get tired of reading about "depression or suicide" or whatever falls under thoughs catorgories. Well written except for a few miss spellers but hey...i got the point.lol. great job!

    victoria

    (plz...if u have time comment and rate mine)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kitten

    Other than a few minor misspellings it was very good. I can relate to the feeling. I'm like victoria I always enjoy a 'depression or suicide' poem. You paint such a vivid picture with your writing it's like it's happening right in front of me.

    I also found out while reading this, I can not listen to music and read and comprehend a poem at the same time.