Life Long Love

by Hopeless Romantic   Nov 19, 2009


Forever in my heart you'll remain.
We'll never be apart, I hope its true.
I pray I never know the pain
Of a life without you.

A life with you is what I need.
To hold you in my arms is what I desire.
A love that will never cease,
Like the flames of an eternal fire.

My heart aches to be so far away.
Every part of me wants to be with you.
I promise my love will never sway.
It will always be pure and true.

I need you by my side.
To make everything right.
My love for you I will never hide.
It will always be kept in plain sight.

I crave the look in your eyes,
When you say you love me.
I hope that spark never dies,
Leaving me alone and empty.

I Love You, each and every day,
and I pray that you can see,
I will always feel this way,
From now through eternity.

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  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    "A life with you is what I need.
    To hold you in my arms is what I desire.
    A love that will never cease,
    Like the flames of an eternal fire. "
    ^^my fav stanza
    I agree with Hollymariee as well; the beginning had very good flow, but once it got towards the end, it sort of faded. But I think that the emotioned evened it out. Overall, very good write. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    The flow is best in the beginning .. It starts to wean in quality towards the end . I really admire how you rhyme every two lines , it's not very easy to pull off . I also think you did well on this one , and your feelings are easy to understand . Really well done , 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Very well-written with great emotion behind each word.
    Keep up the superb writing.
    5/5

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