Your Eyes Are the Windows to Your Soul

by TheBarefootedCowgirl   Nov 23, 2009


I look into your joyful eyes
and hear your joyful laughter
observe your joyful life
and your joyful soul

evil, hateful eyes
plan a hateful deed
releasing hateful threats
from a hateful soul

i peer thru tearfilled eyes
over this tearfilled ocean
saying a tearfilled goodbye
to another tearfilled soul

i stare thru empty eyes
at this empty piece of paper
as a write empty words
to fill an empty soul

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  • 13 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Well thank you :)

  • 13 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Well this is different than anything I've read. I appreciate the repetition and while it's not an amazing poem, it stands apart.
    Also, cute username :) I like it.

  • 14 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Thanks Aaron.

    and thanks Alisha for the critque.

  • 14 years ago

    by Aaron Martin

    Wow emz, this is pretty good.