COMING

by kate   Nov 26, 2009


Come over a bridge.
she shall see you coming.
honk three times before the hill.
she shall see you coming.
arrive to the river with your reflection.
she shall see you coming.
the house is a few feet away.
she shall see you coming.
a car accident request the reality.
she shall see you coming.
in heaven you get through the gate.
there is a women that saw you coming.

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  • 14 years ago

    by FindingHarmonyInYurCries

    Aww.
    That's really good :)
    It has the effect of sounding like a love story;
    Then ends with tradgety!
    ;) Love it.

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    That was very excellent indeed. I loved the repition through out. Some try to use it and it just doesnt work well, but this definetley did. And i didnt quite expect the ending but i loved it none the less. A well deserved 5/5

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