Let You Have Another Drink

by Good Enough   Dec 14, 2009


The swooping of the alcohol
Sends me on waves thats crash
Along the coast my feet stagger
Trying to walk forward
But the alcohol has controlled me
Telling me to finally sit
The dizziness makes me feel weak
But my body craves it more
The voices seem louder
More intense in their tone
Smirky remarks thats seem persuasive
To Let you have another drink

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  • 14 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I like that I can understand your poems
    so fast I hate poems I have to read over and over to get the hidden message. I
    mean they're cool too. it just these short
    powerful poems you write are my fav. kind
    I don't have the volcaularity as you do or
    spell for s**t but I try i wish there was a spellcjheck for commments lol