S0 Many You's

by Donna   Dec 17, 2009


Now you're gone . I had the strength to let go
A smile . Behind the face . Yet emptiness n hurt too
Peace at last . Yet so lonely . I missed the real you .
It wasn't all bad . This I knew . Lost in the bottle
It was hard to accept . Lonely too
All the different you's It was so strange
I knew it wasn't you . It was beyond your control..
The scars from that abused child . Alone
The bruises. Beatings the emptiness too
Lost childhood . Identity gone (you went to war
Came back a different you)
A lost love broke you too . Then you hid in a bottle.
And lost the true you . To hide your pain and sorrow too
A love so strong . Hasn't died . Just lost in a bottle
The person you became . Wasn't you this I knew
The bottle first . Nothing else . How it hurt.
I lost my true love . To a bottle
I watched you change . new it wasn't you .
Didn't mean I didn't love you. Or didn't care
I just couldn't see it through . I lost the true you
I watched you . Destroy you . Lost in a bottle
And couldn't watch . Or take no more.
Cause I loved you so . Yet I lost you in a
Bottle

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  • 14 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    WOWWWWW < Above everything else
    the bottle came first
    Nothing matter
    nothing hurt

    I just could'nd
    see it through
    I lost the true
    you

    I watched you
    destoy you
    It did'nd mean
    I loved you
    any less
    It just meant
    the bottle was
    first and the hell
    with all the rest>

    sorry about the last line I got carry away with your poem
    see thats what I was talking about befor your poetry hits you in the heart. you wake me up I would proably be that guy that hollars out a comment in a threatre if this was
    a movie