Barbed wire around his heart

by Chelsey   Dec 17, 2009


It's a crazy situation, an unfortunate circumstance
I wish we both had the guts to just take a chance
Risk it all, fall in love, and don't care what people think
Make love all night as we gasp for breath in sync

But your nervous, your scared, and I really understand
Let me help you, calm down, please just take my hand
I see it, its guarded, but your heart is there
Longing for love and for someone to care

Its taped, fenced off, you don't want to let anyone in
But I could give you more than just a night of sin
Your beautiful, I see it, the side of you that you hide
Just know I'll be here waiting if you ever decide

There's a barbed wire fence he has around his heart
I want to get in, but I don't know where or how to start
I just wish there was a way he could let me get through
He's scared, I'm scared, maybe there's nothing we can do

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  • 14 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    I loved this piece girl!

    ...gasp for breath in sync
    ^ ^ ^
    This expression is breathtaking, love love it!

    There's a barbed wire fence he has around his heart
    I want to get in, but I don't know where or how to start
    ^ ^ ^
    And I loved how you meant to show how his heart is protected with his guard/walls up instead of using the usual cliche words. 5/5! Awesome write (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Windsong

    I really love this poem. I was like that, and i messed it up, but now that he is back in my life he has to be the one to brake it... But really this is an amazing poem.
    5/5