Mother

by Sadespair   Jan 9, 2010


I've always tried, I never stopped
I wanted all your problems to be solved
You hurt me so bad you make me feel like crap
Yet I try to please you and you yell at me!
What did I do wrong am I that bad?
I say OK you get mad
I say no you get mad
What.?. do you enjoy causing me pain?
I cry Tonight for the words you've said left a mark.

you have me scarred
your the reason for what I am and hate who I am

I'm sorry I'm not perfect
I'm SORRY I'm not you...

Mother! yet all I want is you to me proud of who I AM but THAT will never happen...

**This one is super old. I love My Mother and she loves me. Well the only way she knows how.**

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    I feel a similar way with my dad. im sorry for your troubles. hopefully it will get better as you get older. :(

    i have a few suggestions for improvement.
    I always tried I never stopped
    ^I'VE always tried, I never stopped^

    I wantED all your problems to be solved

    Yet I try to please and you yell at me!
    ^Yet I try to please YOU, BUT you yell at me!^

    What do you enjoy causing me pain?
    ^What? Do you enjoy--...^
    or
    ^WHY do you enjoy-...^

    your the reason for who I am and hate that I am
    ^YOU'RE the reason for who I am, and hate WHO I am^

    i hope some of those suggestions help. and i hope you feel better soon. thanks for sharing <3
    ~Kuro

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