Souls reunited once more
Running barefoot in the sand
Laughter's music fills the air
True love eternal hand in hand

Just another masterpiece. Imagination of running barefoot in sand...thats awesome and am sure many could relate to this. Its always easy to relate tour poems coz of the simplicity in it, great poem.

all the best and take care

So sad..its like been caged within a wall that
is unbreakable is what I felt..a touching write..take care.

There were so many poems, I missed this one. Good job with the title and it does evoke sadness when I read it. Well done.

Definatly agree with all the above comments, your emotion was easily felt & grabbed the reader. Nicely done .

A hauntingly sad yet beautiful write Cindy.Each stanza is as painful as the meaning it projects.

Days in the sun are no longer
Light rays won't penetrate these walls
Living now in solitude
Arms reach out, embracing death's call.

This stanza brought a tear to my eyes for I know well the meaning behind it.

You've done a beautiful job with this piece my friend.
Take care.
Paul...

Though this poem moved me to tears it was so well penned

Brilliant Cindy!! Your talent shines!

This was perfect in everyway, you manage to jerk the heart to tears. praise God for the hope he gives his people of a life after this one. 5/5 you've become an outstanding poet...

"True love eternal hand in hand.."

What a way to end the poem dearest Cindy. This is a 5 for me.

Somehow, this write has an element of sadness, but also a little bit of hope.. Always keep that hope.

Cindy,

~Such beauty and a lovely masterpiece~

Take care,
Ray

;_;

this was beautiful. it made me think about how we all get older and sitting in an old-folks home, they sit and stare out the window like a caged bird. stuck in a continous state of nostalgia.

they remember playing outside in their youth.

"Running barefoot in the sand
Laughter's music fills the air"

brilliant. i think i'll favorite this, if you don't mind :)

A truly excellent write, Cindy - well done.
All the best,
Ben