by Indian Comma Bean Feb 8, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Picking supernovas from my garden |
by OHgreenman
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Great use of metaphores and imagination! Flowed from beginning to end...another great write. |
by Rachel RTVW
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Picture painting imagery! What a nice word choice and flow. I like how the poem doesn't rhyme until the last stanza and then you have an internal rhyme in one line and then the end rhymes....it makes the rhythm memorable. Creative metaphors. Great job on this one! |
by Angie
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Damn, I am speechless... This piece is magnificient, this is by far my most favorite by you... |