Rose

by Something Diabolical   Feb 8, 2010


Like the thorns of a rose
you hurt me my love
though your beauty still remains

you decieve me
with your petals my love
such beauty cannot exist

like a rose you are always looking beautifull
but hiding the prick of the thorns
look but do not touch
is always how it was

you are
my rose

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  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Wow! What a beatiful penned poem
    I loved it

    Great poem 5/5 x

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This piece has been penned to perfection. It is absolutely amazing. Great job with the creativity. It is so short and so simple, yet it is remarkbale. Excellent job

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Interesting and different. It makes a good comparison. Nicely worded.

    gave it a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    Very nice! The expression of true love..liked it..

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